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Open Question Night: 11/24/06



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Mary Rosenblum

Hello all

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Welcome to our Friday After Hours.

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I hope you all had a very nice Thanksgiving....those of you down here in the US at least.

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I'm having a hard time getting my head around the fact that the holiday season is beginning.

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This is one of our open question nights.

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If you have a question you've wanted to ask and just haven't gotten it up here...now's the time. :-)

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No question is too simple.

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For those of you who attended my chat with Sheri Gormley, talking about writing series novels and Virtual Tales

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I'll be having lunch with her tomorrow. I wanted to find out more about Virtual Tales and their serial marketing plans.

geezer

p. 240 of the novel course: what is the tracking mode and where is it?

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Tracking is a mode you can select with microsoft Word.

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It shows any changes you make on the manuscript.

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When I work on student assignments sent to me via email, for example...

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I use tracking so that my student can see the changes I've made on the manuscript.

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If the student wants to leave it the way I changed it, you simply click on 'accept change' and the changed text becomes permanent.

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If you want to keep it the way you had it, you choose 'reject change' and it goes back to how you had it.

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In Word, you find it by clicking on 'Tools' at the very top of your page.

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Under 'Tools' you click on 'Track Changes'. That turns it on.

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Click on it again to turn 'tracking' off.

red 1

Do editors (or the slush pile "engineers" who select what goes forward to the editor) keep a log of submissions to prevent writers resubmitting previously rejected work?

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Yes, they certainly do, red.

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That's why it's important, if an editor suggests changes, to make it clear when you resubmit that manuscript that you are doing so...

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because the editor requested some changes. That keeps someone in the mail room from returning your manuscript

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with a nice note telling you that they don't take resubmissions.

tory

Do you use the tracking mode on your own MS, Mary? Pros and cons of it? Must changes be accepted/rejected within the session of use, or at a later time?

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The changes can be accepted or rejected whenever you want, tory.

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Personally, I think it's only useful in critiques. I never use it on my own manuscripts.

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If I want to change something, I change it. I might read that section later and decide I don't like the change and then I'll change it again.

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I do suggest that if you are going to make a BIG change

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such as to remove a character or introduce a major new plot element

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that you save the original version before you make that huge change.

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If you alter two hundred pages of manuscript and then realize you were barking up the wrong tree and you were better off with the original version

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you still HAVE that original version.

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I back up all my active files on a CD once a week, so if I suddenly decide I want the version I worked on two weeks ago...I have it. :-)

attybern

What is your opinion of self publishing vs publishing houses

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Well it entirely depends on what you want from publishing, attybern.

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If you want a career as a writer, you want to see reviews of your book in big papers and magazines and get invited to conferences, this is not the way to go.

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If you want to publish your family memoir, or a book with a strong niche market (zookeepers), then it's probably your best option.

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The problem with publishing work for the general public is that self publishing is awash with very poorly written, unedited work, and the reading public and reviewers

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know it. So saying your book is 'self published' has a negative connotation until proven otherwise.

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That said, a friend of mine has published several books herself -- books of humor for dairy goat owners -- and she has made several

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thousand dollars on each book.

megbelle

What is the best way to organize my portfolio?

megbelle

I write for my school newspaper and want to arrange articles

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Well, find a way that makes sense to you, meg.

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You can organize them by topic...that's probably simplest.

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Or by season.

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Any time you''re setting up a file system, ask yourself how YOU will look for things.

chatty lady

Do you know any book self pub. being picked up by a pub.?

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No, chatty. You'll find a lot of urban myths about it. But in order to interest NY you'd have to sell about 10,000 copies in a year.

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Then they'd be more interested in your next book, not this one.

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Most people who self publish sell under 100 copies in a year. Well under 100.

megbelle

Should I include the article or the whole paper?

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It simply depends on what you might be looking for, meg.

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Will you be looking for, say, articles on girls' soccer?

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Then you might label the file 'girls sports' or 'girls soccer' depending on how many articles you have.

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I'd just save the article. The whole paper will take up a huge amount of space, believe me.

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I long ago started cutting articles out of magazines. I get a LOT of science mags and I don' t have that much storage space.

tory

If you enter a contest and win money with a MS that has never been in the hands of your agent, does your agent still earn a percentage?

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That depends on you and your agent and your contract, Tory.

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My agent would not expect any money from a contest win.

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She doesn't make any money from my short fiction sales...nor does she handle my short fiction.

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But conceivably you could be expected to do that.

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Unlikely, but it could happen.

sailor

The deputy editor (#2 on the mast head) at a mag accepted my submission and invited me to send future pieces of that type directly to him. Now the mast head shows him as the publisher. Is it unusual for an editor to become a publisher? Is he still useful to me as a contact?

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Huh, interesting, sailor. No, it's not that unusual in the small press world, it IS unusual in the larger presses where the publishing house is a big corporation.

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And it depends entirely on how the system is structured, but I"d certainly send the next piece to him.

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Patrick Swenson is the publisher of Talebones. He is also an editor of Talebones.

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This man is very probably still editing. If he is not, he'll pass your submission on to the appropriate person and you'll hear from him or her.

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Don't worry. He's not going to throw it away. :-)

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'Publisher' is the one with the checkbook.

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'Editor' is the one who puts the magazine or book together.

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But in small press, they often blur.

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This is our After Hours Forum, with me, Mary Rosenblum, your web editor This is an open question night…anything goes! I've published eight novels, more than 60 short stories, and will do my best to answer any questions you have. If you're new here, remember that you need to click on the 'Ask a Question' button or the 'word bubble' next to the red question mark at the top of the screen in order to ask a question. Your regular 'send' bar won't reach me! Or you can use /ask and type your question into the regular send bar if that works better for you..

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What? Nobody has any questions? :-)

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Atty, type /ask add a space, then type your question.

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They it'll come up here to the stage and show up in the transcript.

attybern

I have a book on bankruptcy that I wrote and was in the process of self publishing, but now wonder if I should submit to a publishing house for consideration?

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Good question, atty!

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Well, this is a hot topic these days. I'd say that if you have good credentials...that is, you have professional credentials in the finance universe

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then you should try the big nonfiction publishers first. Their distribution is much better than what you can do with self publishing.

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Lacking impressive credentials -- say you're simply writing from hard earned experience -- I'd go with the self publish route.

speckledorf

Farm mentioned Celestine Prophecy as a book that started out self published and was picked up by a major publisher. I checked and he sold 100,000 copies of it in a year out of the trunk of his car before it was picked up. So...if you work at it really hard, it might happen.

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Yes, but that's not work. That's the 'brass ring' factor that is true for all of publishing.

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Some books simply proliferate. Rowling did not write the first 'wizard school' book, nor is it probably the best. But it connected...right time, right book.

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You can drive all over the country with a trunk full of books and fail to make decent sales. And can you do that?

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You have to give serious thought as to how much time and money you can put into promotion if there is no guarantee of any real return.

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It's easy to hear about something like that Celestine P. thing and think 'anyone can do that, so I can too', but why hasn't it happened way more often?

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That 'brass ring' factor is real. If you get it, appreciate it!

tory

This seems so silly a thing, but I have read opposing instructions. If using Tin=mes New Roman font (which is, I believe a proportional font), do you know if we should use one space or two after a period? I know in the larger fonts it is one, but in TNR one looks very odd and is, I think, hard to read.

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What I have heard, tory, is that it's only one space fater a period. You know what? I am HARDWIRED to space twice and will do so forever. You know what else? It's not ever going to cost you a sale. Don't worry.

forest elf

Hi Mary! I did something dumb. Should I be worried? After my brother begged to read my novel (the one being published) I went ahead and sent it to him via email as an attachment. My brother is a poor student and ended up pawning his laptop. He left my novel (and all his other stuff on it). He may lose his computer because he doesn't have the money to redeem it. I do NOT like the idea of my novel ending up in the hands of a stranger.

Mary Rosenblum

Ouch, forest. Did you smack your brother one upside the head?

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You're kind of up the creek and this is a consideration any time you send a copy of your novel to someone.

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It's /ask atty. :-)

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You're not legally at risk, elf.

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You own the copyright. Is the person who finds it likely to do anything with it?

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Probably not.

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But it is something to think about, next time you send someone an entire manuscript as an efile. YOu don't want it up on the internet in twelve places.

attybern

I presume that the brass ring factor does not occur very often for if it did, we would all be as rich as Rowling?

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Exactly atty and we all, everyone of us, hope that we grab that brass ring with our next novel. :-)

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Nobody has yet made it happen on purpose. It's like getting struck by lightning and just about as likely, sigh.

charie'

When I put ellipses to indicate hesitation my courier font crowds them together instead of spacing them? Is there a way around this?

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No. Word processors are autocratic beasties and don't negotiate well. :-) But don't worry

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the editor recognizes your intent and they'll be using a publishing program that follows house stylesheet anyway.

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Either that or you'll get an editor who hates elipses and simply gets rid of 'em all.

charie'

So if I only put two dots, it's okay?

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Nah, use three. If you use two, the editor will have to add the third for the typesetter.

red 1

Do editors sometimes reject material because they are looking for a writer with consistent submissions to build a fan base for their mag? If so, how many subs in what period would catch their attention (assuming you write well, of course) I understand good material is rejected all the time along with the dredge

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Well, it kind of works the other way, red.

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An editor may buy a story from you that isn't quite as strong as he/she wants because that editor has seen regular

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submissions from you. The editor sees you getting better, knows you'll break into pro pretty soon

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and really wants to be the one who 'discovers you'. Loyalty is a big factor.

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Gardner Dozois got to see all my SF first because he bought my first stories for Asimov's.

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So he got the pick.

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If editors see you often enough to recognize your name and remember what you wrote, you'll make an impression.

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They'll watch you and as you get better, they'll be more likely to buy your story than one of comparable quality from someone they have never seen before.

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Numbers? I'd say six to twelve a year.

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Submissions I mean.

attybern

What do you mean by credentials?

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A big publisher will want you to be an 'expert' on bankruptcy before they'll publish you.

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A strong professional reputation (you write the finance column for The New York Time or The Economist) will make readers want to buy your book.

attybern

Does my 13 years in the business count?

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Absolutely!

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I'd certainly pitch your book to NY before you self publish.

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The money for nonfiction is VERY VERY good. Much better than for fiction.

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By all means try that route first. Take a look at what is on the shelf on bankruptcy right now. (Visit Barnes and Noble)

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and then see if you can pitch a book that will provide something these other books don't.

red 1

That's the angle I meant to ask. I kinda worded it backwards. :)

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Yeah, that's how you break in. Some editor realizes you're serious and gives you a hand up.

charie'

To digress - We must all keep going out into the storm (writing) to attract the lightning. :-)

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Oh yeah, charie! That blockbuster lightning can't strike you if you don't have a book out there!

sailor

A member of my critique group has written a mystery novel that is also humorous - an unusual combination. Our critique group thinks it's good, and chapter one won 1st place in a local writing contest. She's just started querying agents and publishers. Any idea on good prospects for mystery/humor combination?

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Oh gosh, the mystery universe loves humor. It's generally in the cozy category, but a number of humorous series have done very well.

forest elf

If a publisher has a different set of guidelines for published writers and not published writers; I am guessing a person with a contract with a publisher, but the book is not yet on shelves, would fall under not published. Right?

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Depends, forest.

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Do you mean contests?

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A book publisher considers you published if you have signed a contract.

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But some contests consider you unpublished even if you have sold work, but it has not yet been printed or posted online.

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You need to read the contest rules carefully.

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Sailor, you might have your friend try Berkely Prime Crime.

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They have done a number of humorous mystery series in the cozy universe.

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She'll have to get an agent for them, though.

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And the agent will surely have his or her own ideas of where to send the book.

gskearney

Sorry, Charie' I'd rather run around naked in the bank trying to attract money. Lightning hurts. --gk

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A blockbuster lightning doesn't hurt much, gary. :-)

red 1

You do that, and you might find the lightening of a taser! LOL :)

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Very likely. But it's a great image isn't it?

charie'

If your book does make it BIG, do you get paid to go on the talk shows?

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Oh, if you're the Next Big THing, you can have your publicist do whatever, charie. :-)

sailor

The local newspaper (small weekly pub) is looking for a reporter. I'm fairly new to the area, but friends who have lived here a long time tell me the husband/wife publisher/editor team are miserable people, very difficult to work for and I should avoid them. The ad says the applicant myst be able to work all hours, including evenings when necessary. My gut tells me to pass on this, but would "newspaper reporter" impress editors at magazines?

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Yeah, sailor, as a NF writer, it's going to be a good clip. But not good enough to be worth it if the job is awful. BUT...just

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because other people don't like this team, maybe you'll have no trouble getting along with 'em.

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Try it. Quit if it's a lousy job.

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Why not?

gskearney

Yeah, there's the start of a story. Man running naked through a bank to jumpstart his literary career. Any pub is good pub. --gk

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That's certainly true.

sailor

A short stint as a reporter could be seen as a negative, but then I wouldn't have to mention it to a mag edtior.

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Yeah, you don't have to admit you only worked there one week. :-)

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I'd say that for a NF freelancer, it's a good job.

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If the working conditions aren't too awful.

forest elf

Mary, I wrote four articles (paid) for a local weekly paper when I lived in California. My name was listed as one of their staff reporters. I was only listed for about three months. Should I use that when submitting articles?

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Of course, elf. It won't impress fiction editors a whole lot....lots of NF writers can't write fiction. But it does mean you can write a complete sentence. :-) And it will be a valid clip for NF submissions.

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Well, we're almost out of time. Any last questions?

sailor

One of the requirements for the reporter job is "Must be able to write in complete sentences." I think they are having trouble finding someone with good language skills.

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I'm chuckling. That has the ring of frustration, for sure.

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You might find out that you get along just fine with 'em.

attybern

Yes, do I submit my NF manuscript or the printed version of the bankruptcy book?

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If you've already self published it, atty, that might be a problem.

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If you haven't marketed it yet...if it's not for sale in public places...I'd submit the bound version to agents.

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But make it clear that the book is not for public sale.

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I hope you'll all join me Sunday evening for our casual get together.

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We get together right here, same time, to talk about whatever.

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They're fun evenings.

speckledorf

See you Sunday...have a good weekend:--)

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You all have a good weekend, too!

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Don't shop too hard!

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We might even have snow by then!

charie'

What is next Tuesday's topic?

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New Trends in Publishing, Charie.

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Looking at all the various new forms of publishing.

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See you Sunday.

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I'll post the transscripts in the usual place.

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